(Historical Notes: Okay, this is another one of those cases where the sloppy art isn’t just annoying from an aesthetic standpoint, but actively interferes with the joke. The time-saving technique of just copy/pasting the same hallway and crudely adding some[…]↓ Read the rest of this entry…
(Historical Notes: It was very considerate of all the robots to stay lined up right in front of the door instead of spreading out beyond the gun’s range.)
(Historical Notes: I vaguely remember Past Me making some kind of joke about people in the future either not knowing what a lightbulb is or only knowing it as a visual cue for having an idea and not as a[…]↓ Read the rest of this entry…
(Historical Notes: See kids, this is what noticing a potential plot hole and turning it into a plot POINT looks like. Everything Eric points out here didn’t occur to me until AFTER the previous page had already been drawn, I[…]↓ Read the rest of this entry…
(Historical Notes: “Look, it’s not MY fault the security system I installed didn’t hit the intruder! The recording clearly told him to stay still! How was I supposed to know that the unauthorized intruder trying to break in would flagrantly[…]↓ Read the rest of this entry…
(Historical Notes: …yeah, Vance is still crazy. Again, this moment itself works just fine, but I wish we’d had a few more glimpses of full-on Crazy Vance earlier so that it’d hit that much harder that this isn’t just a[…]↓ Read the rest of this entry…
(Historical Notes: So here’s the thing, I actually really like how these pages turned out ON THEIR OWN. I wouldn’t change a thing about them, conceptually speaking. I mean, the art could stand to be polished up but you get[…]↓ Read the rest of this entry…
(Historical Notes: Hey, is everybody sick of me complaining about the mishandling of Vance’s slide into madness by now? GOOD NEWS! I’m about it do it some more!)
(Historical Notes: Just because you aren’t saying it out loud doesn’t mean you aren’t still jinxing it. Fate is like the readers, it can still hear inner monologues.)
(Historical Notes: Okay, this is a cool moment, but the art REALLY lets it down. Even my normal standards for the time, the proportions on Eric are especially wonky and distracting. I may complain about having to draw odd perspectives,[…]↓ Read the rest of this entry…