(Historical Notes: See kids, this is what noticing a potential plot hole and turning it into a plot POINT looks like. Everything Eric points out here didn’t occur to me until AFTER the previous page had already been drawn, I[…]↓ Read the rest of this entry…
(Historical Notes: “Look, it’s not MY fault the security system I installed didn’t hit the intruder! The recording clearly told him to stay still! How was I supposed to know that the unauthorized intruder trying to break in would flagrantly[…]↓ Read the rest of this entry…
(Historical Notes: …yeah, Vance is still crazy. Again, this moment itself works just fine, but I wish we’d had a few more glimpses of full-on Crazy Vance earlier so that it’d hit that much harder that this isn’t just a[…]↓ Read the rest of this entry…
(Historical Notes: So here’s the thing, I actually really like how these pages turned out ON THEIR OWN. I wouldn’t change a thing about them, conceptually speaking. I mean, the art could stand to be polished up but you get[…]↓ Read the rest of this entry…
(Historical Notes: Hey, is everybody sick of me complaining about the mishandling of Vance’s slide into madness by now? GOOD NEWS! I’m about it do it some more!)
(Historical Notes: Again, Ichabod is not as good at keeping up the misanthrope act as he thinks he is. Also, shame on Past Me for leaving out an establishing shot of the ship from the outside. BAD sequential art! BAD!)
(Historical Notes: Just because you aren’t saying it out loud doesn’t mean you aren’t still jinxing it. Fate is like the readers, it can still hear inner monologues.)
(Historical Notes: Okay, this is a cool moment, but the art REALLY lets it down. Even my normal standards for the time, the proportions on Eric are especially wonky and distracting. I may complain about having to draw odd perspectives,[…]↓ Read the rest of this entry…
(Historical Notes: Actually, to build on what I said last time, seeing more of Mooney blowing away robots earlier actually would have made this even MORE impressive. After all, Mooney has to rely on guns as big as she is[…]↓ Read the rest of this entry…
(Historical Notes: Again, I like this sequence for what it is, but I do thing what it is would have been elevated a bit more if there’d been more scenes earlier of Mooney doing basically this to contrast against all[…]↓ Read the rest of this entry…