(Historical Notes: Yup, here’s the second phase of me emptying out my Old Ideas Folder, in this case to show off whole plot lines that were either dropped or just changed drastically. For the most part, THIS stuff is fully[…]↓ Read the rest of this entry…
(Historical Notes: Two things to discus here. First, my memory of this page is weirdly different than what actually got drawn. Up until a day or two ago, I would have told you this page has THREE rows of panels,[…]↓ Read the rest of this entry…
(Historical Note: In theory, I deliberately made Trigger’s handwriting really sloppy to emphasize how childish and immature he is. In practice, that’s just what my terrible, terrible penmanship looks like before I replace everything in editing. Also, AAAAAWWWWW…)
(Historical Notes: Looking back, it’s something of a oddity to see Layla sleeping at all, now that it’s established what happens when she does. Also, to continue what I was saying about the art on these things, if I’d tried[…]↓ Read the rest of this entry…
(Historical Notes: Okay, here’s the thing. I really like the flashback part of this scene, it’s a lovely little vignette between Trigger and Layla. But the ultimate flaw here is that I just couldn’t come up with a reason for[…]↓ Read the rest of this entry…
(Historical Notes: Okay, one OTHER reason why I didn’t work this scene in was because I already had pages 493 & 494 doing more or less the same thing as this, only hitting even harder. Obviously, doing this flashback before[…]↓ Read the rest of this entry…
(Historical Notes: I’ve thankfully been able to work hints of this in at other places, but I like the way Layla’s greedy materialistic side and her sentimental softy side bleed into each other. Also, the absence of “present day” Trigger[…]↓ Read the rest of this entry…
(Historical Notes: Can you tell that Past Me was really getting bored putting that disclaimer up on the top of every page? Also, any punchline that includes the word “pajama” is automatically going to get a chuckle out of me.)
(Historical Notes: Yeah, remember what I was just saying about saving the “flashback” tag for when characters specifically look younger than normal? Well, that sure doesn’t work here, does it? Also, I suppose it’s worth mentioning that I hadn’t fully[…]↓ Read the rest of this entry…
(Historical Notes: Dang, it’s gonna be hard for Present Me to keep track of which page Past Me decides to brings up what. I should have waited to expound on when this might be happening HERE, not last time. Well,[…]↓ Read the rest of this entry…