(Historical Notes: Again, the fact that Eric is both a soft-hearted cinnamon bun and a unscrupulous thief is in no way a contradiction.)
The Killer Station of Deadly Doom
(Historical Notes: See what I mean about the wheel-spinning? I mean, in Past Me’s PARTIAL defense, I think having these pages come out days apart from each other made it feel like they’d read differently than they do all bunched[…]↓ Read the rest of this entry…
(Historical Notes: Okay, we’re GRADUALLY building up some momentum again. Honestly, even setting aside the actual plot stuff, just having the characters actually MOVE and look at some kind of visual aid helps pick up the energy. Again, I wish[…]↓ Read the rest of this entry…
(Historical Notes: …aaaaand there it is. Again, there’s no egregious plot holes or anything here, just terrible story structure. If we’d previously seen Vance doing… ANYTHING, it’d be more of a “oh right” moment when Eric points out that they[…]↓ Read the rest of this entry…
(Historical Notes: No, seriously, this is the kind of page that promises a MUCH more decisive turn of events than actually takes place here. This is the bit right before the commercial break, the part they play in the “last[…]↓ Read the rest of this entry…
(Historical Notes: I just really like this gag of Eric being a genuinely nice guy while also being a completely unscrupulous thief. I really do wish I got more opportunities to do stuff with the guy… which is technically a[…]↓ Read the rest of this entry…
(Historical Notes: See, this is another thing. This is a perfectly valid bit of exposition necessary to establish what all’s going on, but at this point it’s just TOO much standing around and talking. If we’d cut away to somebody[…]↓ Read the rest of this entry…
(Historical Notes: See, this is what I was complaining about. Ichabod makes these big dramatic “end of the episode” moments out of declaring he’s gonna do something, then IMMEDIATELY starts talking himself out of it, and back again, all due[…]↓ Read the rest of this entry…
(Historical Notes: I know I keep repeating myself, but I cannot stress enough just how badly this story needed to see more of Vance’s decent into crazy actually HAPPENING instead of just having Eric tell us that it’s bad. I[…]↓ Read the rest of this entry…
(Historical Notes: It really caught me off guard how much fun it is to write a character as simultaneously good-hearted and utterly unscrupulous as Eric. In a way, it kind of perfectly sums up the worldview of the Far Out[…]↓ Read the rest of this entry…