(Historical Notes: Looking back, I wish this page had cut away to a shot of an envelope with “read me” fallen behind a desk or under some couch cushions or something like that. After doing certain retcons of other plot[…]↓ Read the rest of this entry…
(Historical Notes: I tagged this page as having a “wall of text” but it’s really more of a wall of diagrams. I don’t have a tag for that, though.)
(Historical Notes: I forbade myself from going in and re-editing pages unless I absolutely had to, and this was not absolutely necessary to change so i left it alone, but it REALLY bugs me that the bottom panel is off-center. […]↓ Read the rest of this entry…
(Historical Notes: Again, the fact that Eric is both a soft-hearted cinnamon bun and a unscrupulous thief is in no way a contradiction.)
(Historical Notes: See what I mean about the wheel-spinning? I mean, in Past Me’s PARTIAL defense, I think having these pages come out days apart from each other made it feel like they’d read differently than they do all bunched[…]↓ Read the rest of this entry…
(Historical Notes: Okay, we’re GRADUALLY building up some momentum again. Honestly, even setting aside the actual plot stuff, just having the characters actually MOVE and look at some kind of visual aid helps pick up the energy. Again, I wish[…]↓ Read the rest of this entry…
(Historical Notes: …aaaaand there it is. Again, there’s no egregious plot holes or anything here, just terrible story structure. If we’d previously seen Vance doing… ANYTHING, it’d be more of a “oh right” moment when Eric points out that they[…]↓ Read the rest of this entry…
(Historical Notes: No, seriously, this is the kind of page that promises a MUCH more decisive turn of events than actually takes place here. This is the bit right before the commercial break, the part they play in the “last[…]↓ Read the rest of this entry…
(Historical Notes: I just really like this gag of Eric being a genuinely nice guy while also being a completely unscrupulous thief. I really do wish I got more opportunities to do stuff with the guy… which is technically a[…]↓ Read the rest of this entry…
(Historical Notes: See, this is another thing. This is a perfectly valid bit of exposition necessary to establish what all’s going on, but at this point it’s just TOO much standing around and talking. If we’d cut away to somebody[…]↓ Read the rest of this entry…